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(4)The changes to the line: "A large batch of private emails purportedly exchanged only among members of a candidate’s campaign team is leaked onto a well-known, publicly-accessible internet site" clarifies for readers what is later picked up on in the analysis, ie these are in-house, closed-circuit, private emails that have been outed. The word trove, I think, should be switched by batch. |
(4)The changes to the line: "A large batch of private emails purportedly exchanged only among members of a candidate’s campaign team is leaked onto a well-known, publicly-accessible internet site" clarifies for readers what is later picked up on in the analysis, ie these are in-house, closed-circuit, private emails that have been outed. The word trove, I think, should be switched by batch. |
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(5)Is the intent candidate's or candidates'? The introduction uses the plural, have so corrected. |
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Revision as of 03:58, 5 November 2018
This is a sample comment. Kubomacak (talk) 14:02, 16 October 2018 (UTC)
Collection of comments to text edits
(1) Two keywords added and will be worked into the analysis: cyber reconnaissance (as defined in T2) and critical infrastructure (as defined in T2 and referred to in the 2015 GGE)
(2) cyber-enabled incidents or incidents in cyberspace
(3) Important to explain the distinction between fake news and real news for the purposes of the scenarios. Not a legal issue, but important for clarity. The one offered may not be perfect.
(4)The changes to the line: "A large batch of private emails purportedly exchanged only among members of a candidate’s campaign team is leaked onto a well-known, publicly-accessible internet site" clarifies for readers what is later picked up on in the analysis, ie these are in-house, closed-circuit, private emails that have been outed. The word trove, I think, should be switched by batch.
(5)Is the intent candidate's or candidates'? The introduction uses the plural, have so corrected.
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